The Monk
By Amy Gerrard
Available at http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/158670
Reviewed by Kathy
Bobo
I could visualize the monastery from
the wonderful descriptions. One could almost hear the Monk’s at Vespers and
chants while reading Amy Gerrard’s short-story, The Monk. The author could have
added more to the story. She could have
given the reader more information such as his name, what order he belongs to
and his location.
The Monk is told from
one single point of view and one character, The Monk. It would have added more
drama if there had been interaction between the Monk and another character. The author leaves two hanging mysteries, “They had plunged
him into darkness, eternal darkness. And he had
remained there until.....”
Amy Gerrard could have added much more to
explain the Monk’s relationship with Erin. Such as what happened, “He allowed
himself a brief pleasure as he thought of ‘Erin’, one of the girls from
the village that he had so loved. Although secret and considered profane before
the teachings of the brothers, he had delighted in her company.”
The story so abruptly breaks away, that
there is no time to consider whether the main character is saint or a sinner. As
a story, The Monk has a good premise, but with more development, it would make
an interesting and intriguing full length novel.
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